Literacy Goals:
- I am learning to make language choices that enable me to express myself concisely/exactly when writing for a particular purpose.
Context: Haiku for Peace Week 2017
Success Criteria- My haiku poem will include:
- Synonyms for peace in English and te reo Māori.
- Images from nature that connect to my message for peace.
- Simile or metaphor
- Plurals
Haiku Sequence
A mad war rages
Peaceful countries are changing
People are rabid
Cold destruction looms
People fall dead on the ground
Te rongo changes worlds
Poisoning the air
Nuclear bombs starving for death
Everyone wants peace
Like sprayed weeds dying
People want to live longer
Fighting hard for peace
- Arly
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Peace Haiku
One can change it all
Peace is different to War
nuclear poisons mao
War is changing us
greed and hunger isn't a mix
war over comes peace
peace is a place we should kaiao
peace is like sun warm and bright
We should whakaaio
- Poppy
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Peace
Take a look around
What is this world turning to?
Make a difference
Our voice will be heard
We can roar like a lion
Resilience, just try
Spring birth of nature
Plants grow like our love for earth
Peace spread like butter
Stop and stare around
Silence listen, serene breeze
Tepid air surrounds
Restful call, the sea
Tangaroa soothes live souls
Crawls for harmony
Te Rangimarie
Tirohia te titiro
He aha te huri o tenei ao?
Hanga he rereke
Ka rangona to reo
Ka taea e tatou te hamama rite te raiona
Te tautuhi, te tamata
Te whanau whanau o te taiao
Ka tipu nga tipu hei aroha mo te whenua
Ka horahia te rongo kia rite ki te pata
Kati me te tirotiro
Whakarongo, whakarongo mai, he wera reka
Ka karapoti te hau o te taiao
Ko te karanga, ko te moana
Ko Tangaroa te wairua e ora ana
Nga pupuhi mo te pai
Tirohia te titiro
He aha te huri o tenei ao?
Hanga he rereke
Ka rangona to reo
Ka taea e tatou te hamama rite te raiona
Te tautuhi, te tamata
Te whanau whanau o te taiao
Ka tipu nga tipu hei aroha mo te whenua
Ka horahia te rongo kia rite ki te pata
Kati me te tirotiro
Whakarongo, whakarongo mai, he wera reka
Ka karapoti te hau o te taiao
Ko te karanga, ko te moana
Ko Tangaroa te wairua e ora ana
Nga pupuhi mo te pai
- Greanne
Haiku For Peace
Loving and Hatred
Bombing like huge firecrackers
evil cold darkness
War cold as could be.
The smoke as black as rubber.
Could it be easy
The warm sunny days.
millions of smiles to last.
And air as clear as glass.
Lots of Souls were lost
Pakanga is so evil.
But peace takes over.
- Josh C
Haiku Poems
Peace or war your choice
The Hiroshima bombing
Should help you today
Once a bomb has hit
The country will cry and cry
Dead kids on the ground.
A peaceful forest
Now like a meteor, bang
Animals all dead.
Men, women, children
Lying lifeless on the floor
Families in grief.
- Abby
Peace Comes From Your Heart
Peace comes from your heart
It is learnt and it is earnt
Break it, regret it
Tonight my kindred
Spirit guides them through the mist
Of the cloudy earth
I’ll take the fight tonight
When the wind blows and rain falls
And darkness fills skies
After it all we’ll
Be flying with no worries
Through purple and Puru
-Hakuna Matata- (Uncle Fern)
Haiku For The Times
Hail hitting my face
It's raining doggos and memes
Flowers dripping dew
- Fern
Haiku For Peace
Caves of ice, melted
The shade of the vibrant sun
Darkness flooding us
Dreams slowly faded
Nature falling into parts
Completely dark skies
Howling screams echo
One small voice can make a change
Can you spread the word
Tumanako cleansers the air
Doves circle the morning fog
Love highlights the sky
- Lillie
Hoping for greatness
nguha for peace and for time
Nuclear strife, free world
Lots of people dead
hope for families of dead
For good life ahead
Gruesome bombing deaths
Hundreds of bodies wasted
Like stones on a beach
All those innocents
praying, “please don't drop again”
Rotting deaths in fields
By Noah and Max
War vs Whakaaio
War defeats world peace
Bombs create chaos and death
Peace defeats nguha.
People seek refuge
Rocky hills provide cover
Nature calls for help.
War gives death and pain
Peace brings love and forgiveness
War and peace brings life.
When nature calls out
We ignore what we have done
We talk of new wars.
- Hazel
Overcome War
Breathing frustration
Dignity lies beneath us
Nature our symbol
War never-ending
Liberty soon to be found
Like hideous gorse
Nature is silent
Filling us with unity
Trees leaves whispering
Fighting together
Making us brothers in arms
Whakaaio is here
Ko te raruraru
Kei raro ia tatou te honore
Te ahua o to tohu
Ka mutu te whawhai
Kaore e kitea te waimarie
Ka rite ki te paohu
Ko te Nature te noho puku
Whakakiia ana matou ki te kotahitanga
Ka waiho e nga rakau te mimiti
Te whawhai tahi
Te hanga ia matou he tuakana ki te patu
Kei konei te Whakaaio
Kei raro ia tatou te honore
Te ahua o to tohu
Ka mutu te whawhai
Kaore e kitea te waimarie
Ka rite ki te paohu
Ko te Nature te noho puku
Whakakiia ana matou ki te kotahitanga
Ka waiho e nga rakau te mimiti
Te whawhai tahi
Te hanga ia matou he tuakana ki te patu
Kei konei te Whakaaio
- Molly
Whakaaio Haiku
Tūī sings up high
Reassuring me of peace
No longer afraid
Steps are so quiet
Nature overwhelming me
Leaves falling like rain
Trees rise high above
Towering over my head
Blocking out the sky
Quiet, so peaceful
People talk amongst themselves
Speak of past horrors
- Aleece
Haiku
Misty Morning fog,
Like a smokey grey blanket,
Me in it’s embrace.
Flames eating forest,
Forests ablaze for humans,
Will we bring water?
Doves settle in trees,
Tree leaves petting the white birds,
A symbol of peace.
Guns roar beside me,
Townspeople choke in black smoke,
Is there hope for us?
Is there hope for us?
By Tara.
Peace haiku
Nature at its best
Colors are bright but precise
Amazing, complete
Ignored, then all gone
All that life, all that beauty
Destroyed, still ignored
Past wars still haunt us
Yet we still seek destruction
With more wars to come
Killing, to no end
We drown in a sea of grief
War devouring us
- Mitchell
Haiku
Sunlight shines above
Beyond every one of us
So warm and peaceful
Dark damp depressed clouds
Pouring sadness like the wars
All those hurt people
Scared afraid clueless
Terrifying screams
Of the hurtful cries
Then we pray for peace
Cry for the hope and freedom
Smile for our future!
- Summer
War
The mad war is shaking
The countries are raging with fire
Bombs are being dropped
Nature is Kua ngaro
Bodies flying up in smoke
One country changes
Poison in the air
War is taking over peace
Silence is raging
War gives us death, pain
We are talking about wars
Who will invade next
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Te Pakanga
E wiri ana te haurangi
Kei te riri nga whenua ki te ahi
Kei te heke nga perepi
Kua ngaro te Nature
Nga tipu e rere ana i roto i te paowa
Ka huri tetahi whenua
Poaka i te rangi
Kei te kaha te whawhai i te whawhai
Kei te kaha te riri
Ko te Pakanga e tuku mate ana, mamae
Kei te korero matou mo nga pakanga
Ko wai ka awhina i muri mai
E wiri ana te haurangi
Kei te riri nga whenua ki te ahi
Kei te heke nga perepi
Kua ngaro te Nature
Nga tipu e rere ana i roto i te paowa
Ka huri tetahi whenua
Poaka i te rangi
Kei te kaha te whawhai i te whawhai
Kei te kaha te riri
Ko te Pakanga e tuku mate ana, mamae
Kei te korero matou mo nga pakanga
Ko wai ka awhina i muri mai
- Nyah Reweti
Haiku
Whawhai and destruction.
Engulfing me in its darkness.
While I wait to die.
Whakaaio is no longer
Only death and destruction
The living are gone
Bright sky bursting with
Colour like a rainbow
Drowning the mountains
BBQ on the
Beach with friends and family
Happily talking
- Miko
Peace Week Haiku
Life, love, happiness
Humans are made for loving
We resort to war
Evil ridden earth
Hatred and deceit takes over
A place without peace
Black smoke in the sky
Death in the air, life, nowhere
Haurangi, should be
Egos begging more
How many lives will they take
Peace is pulverised
By Finn
Free Verse
Suffering of the smoke.
Sounds of the bombs smashing onto the ground.
People trying to be in a safe place.
It would always be worse.
On the 6th of august 1945.
People striving to get out of the city.
They never knew it was coming there way.
Years later the burns of the radiation were still there.
The city burst into flames.
Seventy two years ago many people were killed.
Fresh trees and grass turned into kawau tui trees.
They need whakawhiti to replace the city.
They destroyed the city.
- Wil
War And Nature
Scary dreadful war
Tearing everything apart
Nuclear bombs killing
Whaiwhai is te patu peace
People are screaming for help
But we ignore that
We forget about war
Instead think of our own tuhinga
Create more problems
When Āhua calls us
We ignore it completely
And stare into phones
A war hurting us
It’s like being hit by desks
Killing us with pain
- Caitlyn
People are dying
from the cruel nuclear rain
a huge plane up high
Cancer is killing
Hiroshima was awful
Nature calls you
People do not care
We forget about nature
Whawhai is gruesome
A mad war rages
We ignore it completely
Killing us with guilt
- cameron
War and Peace
Big bombs fall like small leaves
Pain and suffering across the town
Chemicals spread like clouds
Peace, what more could you ask for?
Sparkling water and blooming flowers
Will peace desist
Bombs start to come in tons
Cities flee like fleas
Millions die few survive
Bombs drop, the apocalypse starts
Peace spreads like moss
But all good things come to an end some day
- Bradley
We Strive For Tranquility
We strive for tranquility
To be safe
However getting rid of a threat
Will make an even bigger one replace it
Somebody has to write history and it’s story
History of war is always written by the victor
When you destroy something
You will always make something else
Something to replace it
Persian, 100 years, Napoleonic, The World twice, A Cold and more
Wars have sequels
Whether it involves the same countries or not
The next war will always be much worse
War is a mass murder
As people we struggle to be in Kotahitanga
Greed, jealousy, pain, it’s felt by all
Green grass, fresh trees, Growing flowers
Wiped out by a new cloud
Eternal peace?
Impossible
- Josh R
Nature’s Voice
Nature calls for help
Peace is what everyone needs
War and peace brings life
Wars just keep going
Nuclear bombs starving for death
Everyone dropping
Take a look around
What are we turning into
Let's make a difference
Nature’s gone silent
The lofty mountain calls out
We talk of new wars
- Keisha
The night is freezing
Peace flies by and war stays here
Sadness is in the air
The day is boiling
Families celebrating
Peace, love and freedom
Fighting for their life
At war fighting for freedom
Together frightened
Reunited back
All sacred and overjoyed
Safely together
- Zoe
Bomb’s dropping quickly,
a lot of people dieing,
Hurray wars over!
Poma dropping down
Whawhai are people shooting
Japan's going fast
Big Nuclear weapons
Toxic Gas getting breathed in.
Explosions are big
Peace to Japanese
Rebuild a whole new city
Loud Bells made of coins.
Loud Bells made of coins.
- Ryan
War & Peace
He is an evil sorcerer he is walking along our lands.
He is satan himself.
He kills all that is good in this world.
His riched stench burns all types of nature.
He is the devil he can turn good men into evil titans.
He is the destroyer of worlds the end of all life.
Can you guess who he is. War/Nugha
She is the goddess of life herself.
she protects the living.
And stops the wars.
She is the stand she is the rebellion.
She is the green the blue and the yellow too.
Can you guess who she is. Peace/Whakaaio
- Gage
Haiku
Peace we wish to have
Sadly whawhai, death we get
Lifes, love gone to waste
Bombs dropped everywhere
Dark black smoke colours the sky
And lots are dying
We do not want war
We want peace and to be free
From the disaster
We do not like war
So we really want world peace
And to be war free
- Jack